Author Topic: To all boobie fans: I am drawing a BE picture. (Read 48395 times)

Muhznit · « **Reply #20 on:** August 16, 2006, 09:14:07 pm »

Don't put so much pressure on him- great stuff takes time. And often money.

BIG-K14 · « **Reply #21 on:** August 16, 2006, 09:58:44 pm »

Dude I am impatient guy

KingNitros · « **Reply #22 on:** August 17, 2006, 04:08:57 pm »

Quote from: BIG-K14 on August 15, 2006, 10:10:29 pm

Common hurry up

never rush an artist, if you do, gremlins will poke at your ass with lit cigarettes.

BIG-K14 · « **Reply #23 on:** August 17, 2006, 10:16:34 pm »

ok...WTF?

MMX · « **Reply #24 on:** August 17, 2006, 10:40:22 pm »

HURRYUPHUR- yeah I don't have the energy to be a total asshole.

It's just when people tell me not to do something it makes it soooo hard to actually not do taht thing -_-

But being exhausted and having five memosas helps, I guess.

KingNitros · « **Reply #25 on:** August 18, 2006, 11:29:03 pm »

good thing he isn't like me then, if I am told to go faster I slow down.

MMX · « **Reply #26 on:** August 19, 2006, 03:53:46 am »

Quote from: KingNitros on August 18, 2006, 11:29:03 pm

good thing he isn't like me then, if I am told to go faster I slow down.

Your avatar still looks like a chick humping a prinnie.

Omnipitence · « **Reply #27 on:** August 19, 2006, 05:14:58 am »

To me and my retarded eyes, it looks like an evil penguin dentistry office, complete with nurse with a welding torch for an arm.

tetsaru arigashi · « **Reply #28 on:** August 19, 2006, 06:20:23 pm »

Quote from: Bang Doll on August 19, 2006, 03:53:46 am

Your avatar still looks like a chick humping a prinnie.

huh, so THAT'S what it is... sorry, i didn't recognize it until just now. lol, that's pretty funny...

...or should i say... PRINNY funny?? OMGZORZROFLMAODUDEWTF!!!ii1

so ZeroVirus, how's the B.E. pic coming along? any progress?? and don't worry - it's okay if you're a slow drawer. i know i sure as hell am...

Kiinan Yamasu · « **Reply #29 on:** August 19, 2006, 06:55:59 pm »

It's done. I'll upload it as soon as possible.

As for the dirty picture of Yuriko I drew, it turned out okay, but the hands are kinda... small. You know?

I'll post them up as soon as possible.

BIG-K14 · « **Reply #30 on:** August 21, 2006, 10:22:00 pm »

Finally...

Takato-kun · « **Reply #31 on:** August 27, 2006, 07:21:30 am »

i want to see ^^

Kiinan Yamasu · « **Reply #32 on:** August 27, 2006, 12:18:07 pm »

Where can I HOST something like this? I'm pretty sure LJ will kill me for putting hentai in my gallery.

ROMate · « **Reply #33 on:** August 27, 2006, 12:25:48 pm »

http://geekfag.com/

MMX · « **Reply #34 on:** August 27, 2006, 04:25:03 pm »

Quote from: HGsIndestruc.Roommate on August 27, 2006, 12:25:48 pm

http://geekfag.com/

The page is laughing at me ;__;

tetsaru arigashi · « **Reply #35 on:** August 27, 2006, 06:12:48 pm »

i'm anxious to see this... i hope it meets my expectations.

yeah ZeroVirus, just use geekfag to upload it. you don't have to make an account or anything, just upload your picture, then copy/paste the link it gives you. you can post pretty much whatever the fuck you want to! just watch out for the various smileys that appear on the site - they tend to frighten and distract me... O_O;

Kiinan Yamasu · « **Reply #36 on:** August 27, 2006, 08:04:57 pm »

www.geekfag.com/images/727865525Mifuyu%20BE%20Cause.jpg

The action.

http://www.geekfag.com/images/861891481Mifuyu%20BE%20Effect%20Final.jpg

The REACTION! =D

This was quite a fun project to do.

A few reference points for you guyses...

1: I sorta took an Azumanga Daioh/Negima! Magister Negi Magi art style for the comic. It shows in the way I draw the faces.

2: The Swell 5100 is a reference to the computer I have, the Dell 5100.

3: Yuriko's not wanting "a bigger pen fifteen two day" is a reference to a VGCats joke involving Paper Mario 2's email system. Of course, it's not meant to be read as it's typed.

4: Nishimakicorp... well, look at Tohru Nishimaki's comics. I think you'll get it.

5: I got the way the situation happened from a certain situation in Battle Royale involving poisoned stew and a girl taking a bowl meant for someone else. This time, there's less death and more boobies.

Now the reference points for the BE picture.

1: The hearts coming from Andy's groin? That's a running joke that YTF and I have. If you can't guess why they're there, then you're ytoo young. Shoo shoo.

2: Mifuyu and Yuriko's bikinis? They are pretty much rips of Kirika and Komon's bikinis from Eiken. And yes, Yuriko is holding what appears to be the same innertube Komon used.

3: See the little clam on Kiinan's shorts? It's a geoduck clam, a little guy that appeared EVERYWHERE in a comic my uncle Ray Collins made in the 70's, a comic named "Puget Sound." And he's saying "KRAB Jazz" in Japanese, in reference to the jazz radio station that my uncle gave a shout-out to a lot of the time with his comic.

There ya go. The BE picture, all done'd. =3

tetsaru arigashi · « **Reply #37 on:** August 28, 2006, 12:51:00 pm »

ok ZeroVirus, not bad, but as a (hopefully) future graphic designer and artist, i think i'm gonna have to give you some constructive criticism. don't take this too offensively - all good artists need to be able to learn from their mistakes, as well as from their viewers.

first and foremost, WORK ON YOUR STYLE. your characters, backgrounds, etc. are very flat (and no, i don't mean by the boobies, they're plenty big...), they need more depth. work on shading and details, as everything looks almost as if a child drew it, sorry. study the works of whichever artists you like and try to imitate them, and work on your techniques until you get them down to where you can do them in your sleep if you needed to.

second, ask yourself this: am i drawing this B.E. comic to be comical or erotic - fanservice or hentai? stick to one genre or the other and give it the appropriate style. if it's supposed to be funny, incorporate some things you might have seen in, for example, azumanga daioh or excel saga. if it's supposed to be sexy, then focus more on the B.E. - again, give it plenty of details, shading, and eroticism that'll make your viewers actually want to fap off to it. look at the images from shokunyuu or a similar hentai-manga to see what i mean.

third, be neat with your comic. i could tell that you did your frames by freehand - that's a big no-no. use a ruler or a straightedge and make them neat. they don't all have to be the same size either, so keep that in mind. also, i noticed a lot of speech/thought bubbles in several places. too many of these will seem like you're trying to spam your own comic, so try to squeeze all of your text into one bubble per character, if possible (depending on the conversation, of course). and make sure you have enough room in your frames to fit the bubbles in without crowding the space. if this becomes a problem, adjust the bubble, text, or frame as needed. also, if you're not doing this already, write your text out first, and THEN draw the bubble around it to avoid having to erase anything.

finally, always remember - perfect practice makes perfect.

once you do all that and show me some improvement, i'd love to see another B.E. involving Tifa and Nanako, if possible. hell, maybe i could do one eventually... i'm just always busy with something else, it seems, and i'd also have to brush up on my drawing skills... =/

Kiinan Yamasu · « **Reply #38 on:** August 28, 2006, 02:17:33 pm »

Gotcha. No offense taken. I don't set myself up as a professional artist, so criticism never hurt anyone.

Thanks, and I'll try to improve.

Kiinan Yamasu · « **Reply #39 on:** August 28, 2006, 02:29:19 pm »

Ah yeah, and also, I won't be showing you guys the Yuriko naughty pic at all. Because I KNOW that one is subpar.

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Author Topic: To all boobie fans: I am drawing a BE picture. (Read 48395 times)