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Non-Sogna/VIPER Discussion => Anime Discussion => Topic started by: Kiinan Yamasu on August 11, 2006, 01:31:55 am
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That's right, I am trying my hand at expanding a bustline.
The two involved characters are Yuriko Sanshiro and Mifuyu Tatsumaki, two of my tribute (Read: stolen) characters. You will see the result later.
No, there will not be nudity, pervs. I can't draw nudes well.
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hey man, go for it! we need more stuff like this.
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WOOT! no nudity! I really wanna see now!
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If you need it to be animated, just send the scans to me.
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No, there will not be nudity, pervs. I can't draw nudes well.
We're not pervs, you're just a prude so there harrumph u.u
Oh, and you'll never learn how to draw nudes well if you don't start somewhere >_>
lawl nipples
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actually, i tend to find it easier to draw a nude figure first, then draw the clothes around it. it's okay to erase and go back as long as you don't bear down too hard when you're drawing your lines. of course, i don't draw that often, so i'm no expert - it's just a suggestion. =/
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Update: Turns out I'm drawing a second BE picture as well. This brings the overall picture count to 3.
First picture is a short comic of Yuriko Sanshiro explaining how she bought a formula off the internet, it arrives while her friend Mifuyu Tatsumaki is staying the night, she puts some of the solution into a bowl of soup, Mifuyu pulls a Yuka Nakagawa (that is the say, she takes Yuriko's soup and eats it herself, even though there was clearly a pot of NORMAL soup nearby), she feels funny due to the medicine having been mixed with one of Yuriko's soup's ingredients, blah blah blah. Basically, Mifuyu goes from a G to a K overnight.
The second picture is the one that shows the actual result. It's Yuriko and Mifuyu at the beach with Andy and Kiinan. And it's quite clear that Mifuyu's top is starting to seem smaller to her. You may notice a couple of fun references I made in the picture. I'll point them out when I post the picture.
Third picture, YURIKO'S final result from the solution a couple of days later after having downed 3 doses and a gallon of milk. Needless to say, we're talking Takato-kun art level of boobyness here. With Yuriko ready to tear a top in two. Yay. =3
The whole thing is basically a nice jokey sequence, a sort of "what if Yuriko did this?" deal. In case you can't tell, MY version of Yuriko starts shit a lot. Whereas my version of Mifuyu tries to be a good girl most of the time. (Not counting when she's with Andy. =3)
The project SHOULD be finished sometime soon.
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sounds pretty awesome man, can't wait to see it!
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this is gonna kick ass
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Just try not to get offended when you see Yuriko the size of two (soft) boulders.
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want to see want to see :3
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I will admit that you have piqued my curiosity.
Show me the money.
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I'm not sure if this was explained, but just what is BE? (I have an idea but I'd like to be sure)
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I'm not sure if this was explained, but just what is BE? (I have an idea but I'd like to be sure)
Breast expansion. In most artistic incarnations, it happens over a rather short period of time.
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I will admit that you have piqued my curiosity.
Show me the money.
...Bill? Is that YOU?
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Just try not to get offended when you see Yuriko the size of two (soft) boulders.
I find no offence in that, lol
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I take it that's why bras are reffered to as 'over the shoulder boulder holders'?
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Common hurry up
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I take it that's why bras are reffered to as 'over the shoulder boulder holders'?
...or simply "cupholders." =3
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And for bonus points get a whole bunch and make a slideshow out of it with an animated .gif @.@
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Don't put so much pressure on him- great stuff takes time. And often money.
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Dude I am impatient guy
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Common hurry up
never rush an artist, if you do, gremlins will poke at your ass with lit cigarettes.
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ok...WTF?
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HURRYUPHUR- yeah I don't have the energy to be a total asshole.
It's just when people tell me not to do something it makes it soooo hard to actually not do taht thing -_-
But being exhausted and having five memosas helps, I guess.
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good thing he isn't like me then, if I am told to go faster I slow down.
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good thing he isn't like me then, if I am told to go faster I slow down.
Your avatar still looks like a chick humping a prinnie.
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To me and my retarded eyes, it looks like an evil penguin dentistry office, complete with nurse with a welding torch for an arm.
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Your avatar still looks like a chick humping a prinnie.
huh, so THAT'S what it is... sorry, i didn't recognize it until just now. lol, that's pretty funny...
...or should i say... PRINNY funny?? OMGZORZROFLMAODUDEWTF!!!ii1
so ZeroVirus, how's the B.E. pic coming along? any progress?? and don't worry - it's okay if you're a slow drawer. i know i sure as hell am...
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It's done. I'll upload it as soon as possible.
As for the dirty picture of Yuriko I drew, it turned out okay, but the hands are kinda... small. You know?
I'll post them up as soon as possible.
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Finally...
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i want to see ^^
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Where can I HOST something like this? I'm pretty sure LJ will kill me for putting hentai in my gallery.
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http://geekfag.com/
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http://geekfag.com/
The page is laughing at me ;__;
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i'm anxious to see this... i hope it meets my expectations.
yeah ZeroVirus, just use geekfag to upload it. you don't have to make an account or anything, just upload your picture, then copy/paste the link it gives you. you can post pretty much whatever the fuck you want to! just watch out for the various smileys that appear on the site - they tend to frighten and distract me... O_O;
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www.geekfag.com/images/727865525Mifuyu%20BE%20Cause.jpg
The action.
http://www.geekfag.com/images/861891481Mifuyu%20BE%20Effect%20Final.jpg
The REACTION! =D
This was quite a fun project to do.
A few reference points for you guyses...
1: I sorta took an Azumanga Daioh/Negima! Magister Negi Magi art style for the comic. It shows in the way I draw the faces.
2: The Swell 5100 is a reference to the computer I have, the Dell 5100.
3: Yuriko's not wanting "a bigger pen fifteen two day" is a reference to a VGCats joke involving Paper Mario 2's email system. Of course, it's not meant to be read as it's typed.
4: Nishimakicorp... well, look at Tohru Nishimaki's comics. I think you'll get it.
5: I got the way the situation happened from a certain situation in Battle Royale involving poisoned stew and a girl taking a bowl meant for someone else. This time, there's less death and more boobies.
Now the reference points for the BE picture.
1: The hearts coming from Andy's groin? That's a running joke that YTF and I have. If you can't guess why they're there, then you're ytoo young. Shoo shoo.
2: Mifuyu and Yuriko's bikinis? They are pretty much rips of Kirika and Komon's bikinis from Eiken. And yes, Yuriko is holding what appears to be the same innertube Komon used.
3: See the little clam on Kiinan's shorts? It's a geoduck clam, a little guy that appeared EVERYWHERE in a comic my uncle Ray Collins made in the 70's, a comic named "Puget Sound." And he's saying "KRAB Jazz" in Japanese, in reference to the jazz radio station that my uncle gave a shout-out to a lot of the time with his comic.
There ya go. The BE picture, all done'd. =3
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ok ZeroVirus, not bad, but as a (hopefully) future graphic designer and artist, i think i'm gonna have to give you some constructive criticism. don't take this too offensively - all good artists need to be able to learn from their mistakes, as well as from their viewers.
first and foremost, WORK ON YOUR STYLE. your characters, backgrounds, etc. are very flat (and no, i don't mean by the boobies, they're plenty big...), they need more depth. work on shading and details, as everything looks almost as if a child drew it, sorry. study the works of whichever artists you like and try to imitate them, and work on your techniques until you get them down to where you can do them in your sleep if you needed to.
second, ask yourself this: am i drawing this B.E. comic to be comical or erotic - fanservice or hentai? stick to one genre or the other and give it the appropriate style. if it's supposed to be funny, incorporate some things you might have seen in, for example, azumanga daioh or excel saga. if it's supposed to be sexy, then focus more on the B.E. - again, give it plenty of details, shading, and eroticism that'll make your viewers actually want to fap off to it. look at the images from shokunyuu or a similar hentai-manga to see what i mean.
third, be neat with your comic. i could tell that you did your frames by freehand - that's a big no-no. use a ruler or a straightedge and make them neat. they don't all have to be the same size either, so keep that in mind. also, i noticed a lot of speech/thought bubbles in several places. too many of these will seem like you're trying to spam your own comic, so try to squeeze all of your text into one bubble per character, if possible (depending on the conversation, of course). and make sure you have enough room in your frames to fit the bubbles in without crowding the space. if this becomes a problem, adjust the bubble, text, or frame as needed. also, if you're not doing this already, write your text out first, and THEN draw the bubble around it to avoid having to erase anything.
finally, always remember - perfect practice makes perfect.
once you do all that and show me some improvement, i'd love to see another B.E. involving Tifa and Nanako, if possible. hell, maybe i could do one eventually... i'm just always busy with something else, it seems, and i'd also have to brush up on my drawing skills... =/
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Gotcha. No offense taken. I don't set myself up as a professional artist, so criticism never hurt anyone.
Thanks, and I'll try to improve.
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Ah yeah, and also, I won't be showing you guys the Yuriko naughty pic at all. Because I KNOW that one is subpar.
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Gotcha. No offense taken. I don't set myself up as a professional artist, so criticism never hurt anyone.
Thanks, and I'll try to improve.
no problem man, just trying to help! ^_^ i know i need to work on my own skills as well - i've been wanting to draw my idea for the tetsaru character i've mentioned here and there for my friend's manga...
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Good advice tetsaru. Now Zero knows how to copy the work of others.
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Wow. Came out nicely. I was expectin' an animated GIF or something, but this is better-it keeps me entertained longer ^_^;;. Anywho, as for your next viti-I mean, target, or-crap. FOR ANOTHER CHICK TO B.E.: Peach. But if you want a bit of a chalenge: don't make it involve mushrooms or P-Balloons- it's been done to death.
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Good advice tetsaru. Now Zero knows how to copy the work of others.
hey, you have to start somewhere to get a good idea of techniques. you can develop your own style later on once you get a feel for everything.
if i asked you to draw a prinny, for example, and you had no idea what the hell i was talking about, wouldn't you want to see a picture of one first?? same concept. and sure, everyone knows what a human figure looks like, but i highly doubt everyone has studied anatomical features such as muscles, how the skin fits the body, lighting and shadow, and other similar things long enough to be able to draw them straight from memory without any aid, unless they were already a good artist.
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Good advice tetsaru. Now Zero knows how to copy the work of others.
If you want to learn a certain style, copying examples of that work is the best (and probably only) way to do it. But if it's technical skill you're after, like drawing correctly-proportioned figures or environments with correct perspective, you've got to draw from life. Wait, that's still copying something. Bah, anyway, copying is a good way to learn art.
If you want to develop an original style, don't copy somebody else's art. Draw from life, and as you make your adjustments to the images you'll develop it naturally.
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Looking at the style of others is good for inspiration, but that's really all you should look to other styles for. Roommate definitely knows what he's talking about.
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Well you can't ever only get "inspiration" from viewing others. That's impossible. You always get a little biased if you've seen any at all. So might as well make the best out of it. Don't intnetionally copy stuff, but trya nd learn from it.
PS. Nipples.
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Errrr Ok but not great in my case.....
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well that came out nicely!