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Sogna/VIPER Series => Sogna VIPER Discussion => Topic started by: BremenDruid on January 19, 2013, 08:18:54 am
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I posted a long time ago that I was working on a CTR project, which I still am doing at this moment. I just need some input. Right now I'm trying to uncensor the original gifs. I really just want a public opinion about something.
Attached are two pictures of the same scene. I'm trying to see if people prefer doing the veiny aspect or not. I personally like it, because it adds detail. But, like I said I'd like some public opinion on this. Thanks.
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Here's another version:
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Instead of veins, add texture by defining the ridge between the corpus cavernosum and corpus spongiosum.
...Look it up. (I had to.)
It's definitely easier than veins, especially if you're trying to animate it. You're right that if you're going to decensor, the dick may as well have more detail than a smooth cylinder, and without reference, it can be tough to figure out just how detailed it should be to fit with the art style. I've done some decensoring too, so I know that feel bro.
This'll help:
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I like the first one.
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Thanks for the feedback, I am looking into different ways of giving these images details that fit with the oritinal artwork, so any feedback or suggestions is greaty appreciated. One thing I am thinking about is how to make the images take a harsher or nastier tone from Miki's perspective. Since this is a rape scenario I'm trying to find ways of making it almost disgusting from Miki's point of view.
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Also, these are tests as a proof of concept if you will. I'm hoping to get a digital drawing tablet pretty soon so the finished version will hopefully look a lot better.
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Just a little update, I still am working on this project. De-censoring everything is a bit of a pain. I did decide to use some of the artwork from the CTR book as title cards for different sections of my story. Here's one that I fixed up a bit, just added color to Miki and other details. Let me know what you think.
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Nice work. I think you should go with a different color for the shirt to better distinguish it from her hair.
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Okay, I've tried 3 more variations with 3 different color schemes for her shirt, weirdly I think the blue one works the best, but here's the others:
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I like the red one the best followed by yellow.
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I overlooked some small details with those, so here they are with those fixed:
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weirdly I think the blue one works the best
I don't think it matters. The novel has a major discontinuity in her outfit, as she's wearing the expected red jacket and dark blue tank top on page 173, and then she's wearing this sports jersey and long sleeve undershirt the next time we see her on page 193. So I guess you can make it any color you want.
But she tends to wear red most often, and frequently dark blue or black.
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So I know it's been a while since I've posted anything about this (I'm also keenly aware of the Viper CCR project, and I'm eagerly waiting for that to finish) but I've been working on my own CTR project. Unfortunately I suck at drawing so I've been trying to get better. But enough talk. This is the first frame of just a new part of the rape where Miki gets groped by one of Osamu's gang. It's not something I drew out, it's actually a combination of different images that I worked to put together.
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If you want to make your work look a bit more professional and not be so jagged then i recommend learning either the line tool in Flash or the pen tool.
Here's an animation i did with the line tool in Flash
(http://1.bp.blogspot.com/-50BMF9zky5E/VaNGs1n3ReI/AAAAAAAACcA/ZcL_t5NgQQ0/s1600/carrera_booty2.gif)
More here -- http://www.sognadigitalmuseum.com/forum/index.php?topic=3007.0 (http://www.sognadigitalmuseum.com/forum/index.php?topic=3007.0)
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Nice! Yeah I actually went too quickly on putting that up here. I've since redone the line art and I'm working on getting the rest of the frames in place. I've also made some other corrections to it. I'll post up the first frame again when I have it completed. Thanks for the advice.